Hobbo's Poems
A quirky look at life from a Yorkshire poet and his dog's perspective
Heartbeats
Heartbeats
Two billion each
lub-dub, lub-dub
From cradle to grave
lub-dub, lub-dub
Tender as peach
lub-dub, lub-dub
Worn as a cave
lub-dub, lub-dub
You've stolen mine
lub-dub, lub-dub
Broken in two
lub-dub, lub-dub
Sad celandine
lub-dub, lub-dub
My final tattoo
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i do like “lub dub” as a onomatopoeia. It’s perfect. I had to google celandine. Overall it’s rather lovely.
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Aw thank you. I have to use google a lot, some of my contemporaries are much cleverer than I.😂
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🙂
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Deceptively simple and effective. That last line really works
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So true!
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Thank you! 🙂
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The thumping and your choice of flower. Invasive, slightly poisonous, and oh so lovely. Well done.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Love this one 🖤🖤
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Thank you! 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🖤
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🙂
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