Mortality

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Mortality

Cherry blossom flowers,
Confetti on a tree,
Lifespan only hours,
Then breezes set you free.

4 Comments on “Mortality

  1. Interesting. There’s lots I like about this.i like the confetti imagery. I like that the life span is only hours and then, almost celebratory, the breeze sets you free. So although mortality sounds grim, your poem doesn’t feel grim at all.

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