Hobbo's Poems
A quirky look at life from a Yorkshire poet and his dog's perspective
Wheels
Wheels A wheel, inside a wheel Describes how I feel, Was it part of the deal To metaphorically kneel?
Wheels A wheel, inside a wheel Describes how I feel, Was it part of the deal To metaphorically kneel?
Hobbo's Poems 
A cog in a clock. A screw in a screw-up. I hear you! I think this is like a (significantly) more concise version of my poem “The River”.
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I’m glad you hear me worms. If I wasn’t too concise to have one, concise would be my middle name. If that poem is on your site, I will check it out. 😊
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Oh you read it once. It was about capitalism. But I have … generalized it a bit. It’s the rhyming one.
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I remember now, and I shall give it another read. 😊
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I have just re-read your poem. It is the one I thought, and it does have some beautiful imagery. Like a favourite wine, it was even better second time around. 👍🙂
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Thanks, Hobbo. 🥂. And I like the idea of being too concise to have a middle name. 😁. If name length is a give away, my verbosity was meant to be. 😂
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😂
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Oh, exquisite.
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Coming from your talented pen, I’ll accept the compliment with pleasure. Thank you!
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🙂 You are most welcome. You wield a mighty pen as well, dear Hobo.
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One day, I am going to live long enough to be proud to say,”I knew that Yard Sale woman when she was just starting out as a writer!”
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This message, overwhelms me (in a good way). I’m reaching for the rungs on the ladder, Hobbo. Thanks for the lift.
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You should never feel overwhelmed. I have 100% confidence in your exceptional artistic ability, and I shall be happy to say I told you so when you make it mainstream.
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So incredibly kind. Thank you, Hobbo. I hope the “I told you so” will be in person.
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How cool would that be! I am looking forward to it already!👍😂
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Hobbo 😉
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😊
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