Wilting

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Wilting

Like a fast fading flower
that wilts, by the hour,
our love life could do with fresh water,
but you fight like a bull
and though life's not dull,
you never give me any quarter!

12 Comments on “Wilting

  1. I don’t quite know what to make of this one. The term “continual slaughter” troubles me. May I suggest “repeated slaughter”? Do you think, logically, it’s any less odd with slaughter? Maybe not.

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