Sleeplessness
Slumber will not come,
I've tired out the sheep,
Tried reading boring books
But cannot get to sleep.
Advice from several friends
Is try to count my blessings
But, wed for fifty years,
I'm better counting yessings!
Sleeplessness is horrific. If this is you, I’m completely sympathetic. Hobbo, I’m trying to catch up on reading everyone’s poem, but I’m having real difficulty with my eyes at the moment, so I’ll do my best this evening. In the meantime, keep writing …. (or that keep dancing!) 😂
I can relate to all of this but for the last two lines 🙂 but what I really wanted to say was. I’ve read this three times now and I’m still bowled over by the boldness of the first two lines, how you totally subvert the standard sheep/sleep scenario 🙂
Yep. Oops. There’s another!
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Hehehe!
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😂
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Sleeplessness is horrific. If this is you, I’m completely sympathetic. Hobbo, I’m trying to catch up on reading everyone’s poem, but I’m having real difficulty with my eyes at the moment, so I’ll do my best this evening. In the meantime, keep writing …. (or that keep dancing!) 😂
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Thanks. i’ll keep doing both 😂
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Sombody gonna be in trubb-ell!
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I know. I told Dauph not to write this!
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Sure. Sure. Sure.
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You know, don’t you!
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I can completely empathize with the lack of sleep
Each morning I’ve had huge tower mug of coffee to wake up 😀
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That’s maybe why you can’t get out of bed; you’re drowning in coffee! 😂
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Yes my life raft 😁
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Hehehe.
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👏👏 oh, man. My new fall to sleep technique is now in place.
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👍 Pleased to help! 😂
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💜
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I can relate to all of this but for the last two lines 🙂 but what I really wanted to say was. I’ve read this three times now and I’m still bowled over by the boldness of the first two lines, how you totally subvert the standard sheep/sleep scenario 🙂
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Thank you, John. What I really need to say is how pleased I am that someone takes the trouble to read any of my poems more than once. 😂
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😂
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